hi adnan...kool work...i think ending should be improved a bit.
hey thnks nishtha.. wil definitely improve da latter half
I think second bounce is goin way to ahead and at the end of the first bounce the lamp should be stretched .
hey adnan it really luks great.....but i think.. jab lamp jump kar raha hai....to uska face uper ki aur hona chahiye....may be it is not necessary....but ek baar sir se cunsult kar lena.....
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hi adnan...kool work...i think ending should be improved a bit.
ReplyDeletehey thnks nishtha.. wil definitely improve da latter half
ReplyDeleteI think second bounce is goin way to ahead and at the end of the first bounce the lamp should be stretched .
ReplyDeletehey adnan it really luks great.....
ReplyDeletebut i think.. jab lamp jump kar raha hai....to uska face uper ki aur hona chahiye....may be it is not necessary....but ek baar sir se cunsult kar lena.....